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Thoughts upon waking up next to you

November 26th 2007 06:03
Was it a mistake waking up next to you?


Her side of the bed:

Where am I?

Oh my god. What the...

I knew I was a bit tipsy, but not that drunk.

I can't believe I did this. I've never done this kind of thing before.

What the hell was I thinking?

I hope he doesn't think I'm that easy. Oh stupid stupid stupid me.

And I really liked him too.

He's waking up.


"Hi."

His side of the bed:

What time is it?

Woah.

I remember a lot of dancing. Not drinking. Not a lot.

I can't believe I did this. I've never done this kind of thing before.

What the hell was I thinking?

I hope she doesn't think I do this all the time. Damn, what a jerk.

And I really liked her too.

She's waking up.


"Hi."

*****

Who are they? What happened? What happens next? What's their story?

What's your story?

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Comment by Mr Nice Guy

November 26th 2007 06:36
WYS

Well it sure ain't Hollywood we're talking about

MNG

Comment by What's Your Story?

November 26th 2007 06:43
MNG: Oh, not at all.

Comment by Mark Isaacson

November 26th 2007 09:15
"So," the young man scratches at his forehead, leaning up on his elbows, "I uhh ... hmm..."

"Yeah," the girl replies, shuffling a little to the side of the bed, hiding her form under the sheets, "Awkward."

The man chuckles. "You're telling me."

"So do you, you know, remember ... anything?" she asks.

"Honestly? Yeah, not that much."

"Me neither."

The two fall silent, looking to either side of the room. The male clears his throat while the girl scans the room for her clothes. Finally, blushing, she looks back in his direction.

"Is this your place?"

The man looks around, frowning. "No, isn't it yours?"

The two stare at each other, then back at the room, then at the door...

Comment by What's Your Story?

November 26th 2007 16:23
Mark: I love it!!! Please continue.

Comment by Ash

November 26th 2007 20:51
Hi Toni

ouch! that is probably not the best scenario to be in! Hopefully they will just agree that seeing as they both remember nothing then nothing could have happened and they can start again.

As to where they are? Well he`s a multi-millionaire and organised for his private jet to fly them to Paris for the night to stay in the plushest hotel overlooking a sparkling Eiffel Tower....

Ash

PS Mark that`s classic!

Comment by What's Your Story?

November 26th 2007 23:16
Ash: Yes, nothing could have happened. They could've just fallen asleep before anything actually happened!

Let's both request for Mark to continue his story! Ah, the suspense!

Comment by tlcorbin-raginravensview

November 27th 2007 03:53
Sis! What the hell are you doing here? Hey, where is here anyway? Why are you crying like that...ohhhhh, crap!

Fortunately, the alarm rings bringing with it soul felt relief....for now, the reality is worse than their nightmare.

Raven

Comment by What's Your Story?

November 27th 2007 04:39
Raven: Uh-oh. Sounded like they had one huge drunken night.

Comment by Mark Isaacson

November 27th 2007 10:33
But that was the ending

Ok, ok. It's turning into more of a story than it should, but why not...

---

"You open it."

"No you open it!"

The two bickered between each other in front of the door, the girl wrapping the bed clothes around ... making a note to keep it tight. The guy, white underpants and all, lent an ear to the door.

"Can't hear anything. You sure it's safe?"

"We're in Sydney, of course it's safe"

Shrugging, the guy opened the door, as slowly as he possible could. A second later, the two former strangers peered down a dark hallway, frowning even more than before. Barely a sound filled the air, until finally, another door opened further down the way.

"Yo," a tattooed man smiled, all teeth, "Sleep well?"

"Umm ... yeah" the guy said. The girl poked him in the chest.

"Don't talk to him" she whispered.

"Why? Is he going to kill us?"

"Maybe!"

---

More tomorrow. Might just have to start another blog of my own

Comment by What's Your Story?

November 28th 2007 01:25
Mark: Your stories just get more and more interesting. And you keep us hanging. Haha!

Comment by Mark Isaacson

November 28th 2007 12:09
A good writer always leaves his or her audience with a cliffhanger. But honestly, I'm just making it up as I go along, Tell me if I do go over the top, though.

---

"Where are we?"

The grin grew wider on the older man's face. "Where else could you be?"

"I'm sorry, what?" the male asked.

"Heaven" the man walked away, pointing to a sign on the other side of the hallway. The girl peered closer. "Ok, this is just weird."

"I should have called it quits after three beers" the guy chimed in.

The girl shook her head, dumbfounded. "We couldn't have possibly slept here though, surely?"

The two stared back at the sign, struggling to remember how they had spent a night in the middle of nowhere ... Alice Springs, to be precise...

---

Ok, the finale tomorrow, I promise. Though I'd like to gauge if anyone else is enjoying this little read, I'd love to continue doing stuff like this again.

Comment by What's Your Story?

November 28th 2007 13:29
I'm curious how this will end. I'm enjoying this!

Comment by Ruy

November 28th 2007 14:02
Fan here. Please do go on Mark. =)

Comment by Anonymous

November 28th 2007 21:44
haha we have a SUB-blog on this comment page and i'm actually checking everyday!

soon i'll put this url on my quicklinks hahaha

Comment by Em Dy

November 29th 2007 05:28
I'm also waiting for Mark's ending.

Comment by What's Your Story?

November 29th 2007 05:54
Aha! Mark, you've got lots of fans right here.

Comment by charliesgirl_992000

November 30th 2007 14:18

Comment by What's Your Story?

November 30th 2007 14:22
We're waiting for the next chapter Mark!

Comment by Ash

November 30th 2007 21:16
yeah go on Mark

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