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Hi! My name is Toni and this is my blog on writing prompts. Sometimes inspiration strikes me anywhere, sometimes I badly need a jumpstart. This blog helps with those jumpstarts, when you need a little push. Hopefully the writing prompts open your mind further to new ideas and help encourage you into writing more. A little writing help never hurt!

Let me feel your eyes on me

November 27th 2007 07:22
Look at me.



Write a poem, a blog entry, a song -- write anything that either ends or starts with this question:

"What should I do to make you look my way?"





Begin.









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Comment by Ruy

November 27th 2007 09:28
What should I do to make you look my way?
I am alone and blinded by my heart's noise.
Breathing to die I sway in staccato gasps.
I long to be traced by your line of sight...

What should I do to make you look my way.
I am fading uninspired, unutilized...
Living to die I sing in inaudible cries.


Those sorrowful eyes of heaven,
Dear God cast them on me that I may be alive.

Comment by Hope

November 28th 2007 00:03
Great line, I can feel my creative juices flowing....Will post something in my blog soon.

Comment by What's Your Story?

November 28th 2007 00:15
Ruy: Oh my god, that was incredible. I shivered as I read it. You are a POET, man!

Hope: I look forward to reading it! Thanks for the visit!

Comment by Holly Go Lightly

November 28th 2007 07:50
OOOO I couldn't do anything like that.

Comment by What's Your Story?

November 28th 2007 07:58

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