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In his eyes, I was nothing and everything

January 8th 2008 00:58
Write a story that ends with the following lines:

"You will have me," he insisted, words pressing hard against her will.

"It is done," she whispered, abandoning herself to the striking potency of his gaze.



His Gaze Absolved Me

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Comment by AmyHuang

January 8th 2008 04:36
He is dying, and wants to love of his life to kill him so he doesn't suffer more. He had given her the gun, but she refuses to take it until he took her hands, still shivering and loosely holding onto the gun, he pointed it to himself.

Comment by What's Your Story?

January 8th 2008 07:46
Amy: That is an amazing visual.

Comment by tlcorbin

January 8th 2008 17:50
Gazing deeply into his eyes, she throatily hisses, "..back off the will if you want to live to see tomorrow." Feeling the abatement of his urgent press, "...smart move," she says through clenched teeth but continues to fearlessly face her step dad's gaze.

OK, so I don't do romance well Toni, and maybe I do controversy better, I'm far more versed with it.

Raven

Comment by What's Your Story?

January 9th 2008 00:27
Raven: That was controversial but nonetheless interesting!

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