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Chase the Sun

April 19th 2008 05:35


Chase it
Spread your arms wide
Close your eyes and let
the sun rays stream through you.

Break into freedom
Pedal away
Into the warm embrace
of sunbeams.

Look up
Feel the light on your face
Let the energy in and
feel alive.

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Poem inspired by Photographer's Photo Title

How does the above image make you feel?

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Comment by Morgan Bell

April 19th 2008 07:46
looks a bit like the last few moments before the end of the world . . .

Comment by tlcorbin

April 19th 2008 14:10
hahaha, naw, Morgan, it's the precursor to a major sunburn after the rider catches up with it ~ it catches up with you and viola, sun screens aren't gonna save you completely: then that becomes the end of the world as you know it for several days.

Nice poem Toni, and I love that evening sun photo.

Raven

Comment by Tracy

April 20th 2008 01:48
Mmm, I'd love to be on that bike....

I like your poem, Toni, it compliments the pic well.

Tracy

Comment by Lily

April 20th 2008 03:42
Hi Toni,

Look up
Feel the light on your face
Let the energy in and
feel alive.


words for all the vampires out there me thinks, lol -- makes me feel like doing it..

the warmth of the sun, a bike (with gears lol), and an open road, all sounds good to me...

~Lily


Comment by Mia

May 5th 2008 01:14
That image makes me want to be there on that bike, or at least to find out where that place is so I can go there some day.

Comment by What's Your Story?

May 5th 2008 01:44
Morgan: If that's the end of the world, then it looks quite peaceful!

raven: Thanks for the compliment! I enjoyed writing the poem.

Tracy: Thank you very much!

Lily: Ah yes, it does sound good! Makes me want to wait for the twilight sun and head out.

Mia: I know what you mean. That's exactly how this made me feel too.

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