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November 18th 2007 12:54


Master said that I should ________________. It is too cold for that. It is too cold.

"________ my shoes," Master said. I hesitated. Master looked at me with _________ eyes. It made me _______________.

Master wasn't always like this. Master was kind. It was that one night that changed everything. The air was _______________ and the moon was ______________. It was just the Master and myself. We watched the _______________ outside the window.

Then ___________ arrived. I knew something was about to change. Master and __________ went into a room.

They did not come out till ______________. Then Master was alone. I was with Master, but Master did not see me.

And now it is too cold. Too cold. Master said that I should _________. I do not want to because _______________. But I look into Master's ___________ eyes and I ____________.

I have no choice.


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Copy and paste the above story in the comments section. Then fill in the blanks. What's your story? Who is speaking? Who is Master?

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Comment by Em Dy

November 22nd 2007 00:02
Master said that I should LEAVE. It is too cold for that. It is too cold.

"TAKE my shoes," Master said. I hesitated. Master looked at me with PLEADING eyes. It made me WEAK

Master wasn't always like this. Master was kind. It was that one night that changed everything. The air was COLD and the moon was FULL. It was just the Master and myself. We watched the MOON outside the window.

Then DR. WOLF arrived. I knew something was about to change. Master and DR. WOLF went into a room.

They did not come out till AN HOUR BEFORE MIDNIGHT. Then Master was alone. I was with Master, but Master did not see me.

And now it is too cold. Too cold. Master said that I should GO. I do not want to because I LOVE MY MASTER But I look into Master's PLEADING eyes and I LEFT.

I have no choice.

The Master's house elf is the one speaking. Master was bitten by a werewolf and has been transforming since every full moon. Dr. Wolf has told them there's no cure. The master asked the house elf to bind him to the chair and then leave.

Comment by What's Your Story?

November 22nd 2007 00:20
Em!!! That was absolutely brilliant and unexpected. I love it! My gosh, post that in your blog!!!

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