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After the Eclipse

November 9th 2007 01:54
I don't know why I still come here. She left me a long time ago, when she became one of them. It is dangerous for me to be here. While I am strong, I am no match for their coven.

Maybe they wouldn't harm me. I did help save her for them.

The leaves move and I turn my head quickly. It is the wind, as expected, and I scold myself for hoping it would be her instead. Damn hope. For as long as I continue to hope, I will be in this hell I have created for myself.

Darkness is falling but I do not leave. Maybe if I stay still she will come, thinking that I'm not here. Then I would get to see her eyes, brown, deep, questioning. And if our gazes lock, I will not let go. I will not let go. I will keep her.

And that is why I come here.

And maybe that is why she doesn't come.


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Who is the narrator? What is his/her story? What is yours?

This writing prompt is I guess what one can call "fan fiction." This is inspired by Stephenie Meyer's Twilight series, particularly post-Eclipse. In this fan fic, I write from the perspective of Jacob Black. Bella has joined the Cullens and she has been turned. This is a twist of what could be. I don't own the characters. This is just inspired by Meyer's beautiful world.

And the image for this piece? That's the Hoh Rainforest from the Olympic Peninsula, Washington. *waves to her fellow Twilight fans*

Photo credit [link]

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